Sunday, 25 August 2013

...as the train entered the tunnel ... 100 Word Challenge

"Grandma, I'm so excited about going on a train ride, it's my first time did you know?"
Grandpa said, "Great!  I'm hoping that you won't get scared in the dark, dark tunnel.  When Grandpa looked away my mouth flung open.  

When we arrived at the train station I was very excited, but a little scared.  When we climbed aboard the train I was bursting with excitement, but it wasn't long until I saw the tunnel.  As the train entered the tunnel ... I felt silly about being scared, so I never will again.

1 comment:

  1. Breanna your story was great I think you used great words in your story

    well done

    from Emma

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